郑俊斌老师独创训练妙方 辅导学员撰写PS的成功案例之一 (这是训练的模板之一,外方大学对这篇PS非常满意)
Personal Statement(未培训之前,学员自己写的)?xml:namespace> In March this year, I visited the ?xml:namespace> Grown up in the Hangzhou-based China Academy of Arts, where my parents taught for many years before moving to My interest in the arts deepened after being admitted by the School of the Arts, I experienced the real life as a museum manager when I interned at the National Art Museum of China in 2004 during the organization of the French Impressionist Painting Exhibition. I was responsible for a program that guided student visitors to enjoy and appreciate the exhibit. I also participated in designing questionnaires concerning visitors’ satisfaction with our service. The exhibition was a huge success, fully demonstrating the enormous cultural demand in This working experience was my first step into the kingdom of museum administration, leaving me marveled at the vastness of its territory. How to run a museum? How can a non-profit arts institution finance itself? How should a museum preserve and enrich its collections so as to better serve the general public? I believe that your graduate program in museum studies will provide me with all the expertise and skills I need to answer these questions. I am also eager to acquire the management-related skills -- including collections management, project planning. During my graduate study, I will seek for internship opportunities in non-profit arts institution, for instance museums in When I visited 以下是经过点拨、强化训练模板之后写出并提交的PS Successful PS evidence for PS writing training To : Melanie Williams, Director of Financial Aid CC: From: Yimeng Feng Date : 1 May, 2006. Re : The Arthur Zankel Urban Fellowship Proposal Ref : 20060501A Total Pages (inclg this one): 2 The Arthur Zankel Urban Fellowship Proposal Dear Melanie, I sober-mindedly acknowledge that the Zankel Urban Fellowship is extremely difficult to apply for, which only grants those awesomely outstanding genius. I am well aware of the founder of the fellows program--Mr. Zankel, who were closed related with I personally experienced how good education, positive coaching and correct guiding are badly needed by youngsters in downtown area of New York when I toured there last time, as these inner-city juveniles are being haunted by illiteracy, dropout, luring of drugs and being left out without taking care of as I have been fostered in the environment where I have been given good opportunities in receiving decent education since I was a child as I attended the best high school--an attached High School of the Renmin University of China, and later on continued my college life in Peking University, both of which are the one of the best in my motherland. I have experienced what education is and what power good education can bring about. I enthusiastically feel that what ability and skills I have mastered can well fit into serving disadvantaged inner-city youth such as the Reading and Math Buddies, the Heritage School, and the Student Press Initiative as I have immersed in the environment, where my parents taught for many years in arts, and helped me formally learn to play piano at the age of six and practiced for eight years. I have been told that there are so many Chinese youngster who want to practice English as well as Chinese, which are both where my strength is. My biggest function can work as a bridge. I am sure I can bring happiness to them, making friends with them, becoming a communicator with them and ultimately a soul mate with them. Sincerely, Yimeng Feng ( Signature ) 郑俊斌老师 英语私塾 授课老师
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